2007年10月22日 星期一
Everybody knows that exercising is good for health. Most doctors suggest that everyone should exercise as much as possible. I like to play badminton. It not only can keep my shape but also can strengthen my heart. When exercising, I sweat a lot and help the circulation of my body. After exercising, I feel more relaxed and energetic. I think exercise often will be more health and happy. If I don’t exercise, I will be tired and weak. Therefore, I force myself to do exercise at least twice a week.For health, I would mind that exercise is really important.
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"exercising" should be "exercise".
"It not only can keep my shape" is semantically nonsense -- that means that it doesn't mean anything in English. Why not? Think about what the sentence says: "Badminton can keep my shape." Doesn't that sound like nonsense to you? Your sentence should make sense. To do that, it has to be "Not only can I keep my shape, but I can also strengthen my heart by playing badminton". But you probably also need to add "at least three times a week for an hour or two each time". Playing once a week won't do anything good for your body.
"I think exercise often will be more health and happy." This sentence is also nonsense. It should be "People who exercise often are healthier and happier than people who don't". Please pay more attention to what your words actually mean.
I don't know what "I would mind" means in your final sentence.
While exercising twice a week is better than not exercising at all, to enjoy any health benefits of regular exercise, you have to do it at least three times a week.
Clear enough.
I understand the general idea; however there is one problem.
"I like to play badminton. It not only can keep my shape but also can strengthen my heart." It should be one sentence. And I also don't understand what does the last sentence mean?
"If I don’t exercise, I will be tired and weak." So that's why I always feel tired. You are really a healthy girl compared with most of the girls nowadays.
i agree with you that excercise is good for our body. i do excercise twice a week too and i felt quite relaxed.
however, i think you are too thin, you need to eat more.^^
Does your final sentence meam "I will keep in mind that exercise is really important."?
It is true that keeping doing exercise regularly is good for us.
Exercise is really important for people. Because if we want to have a healthy body. We must exercise very often. Therefore,I agree with you.
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